Shelter (Star Trek: TOS story)

Fanfiction
Title:	Shelter
Author(s):	Leslie Fish and Joanne Agostino
Date(s):	October 1976
Length:
Genre(s):	slash
Fandom(s):	Star Trek: TOS
Relationship(s):	Kirk/Spock
External Links:	Fanfiction.net Shelter on AO3 Shelter online, original online text format as archived by AO3 archive notes on Shelter, from The Foresmutter's Project (1999-2000)
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Shelter is an early K/S slash story by Leslie Fish and Joanne Agostino, though Fish is the primary author.

It was first published in the zine Warped Space #20 in October 1976. It is a cave story.

There are two pieces of art by Fish, both done with a thickened white ink on black board.

"Shelter" has a sequel titled Poses, which was first published in Obsc'zine #1 in 1977. There is also a related sequel in The Sensuous Vulcan called Cooling One's Heels.

"Shelter", "Poses," and "Cooling One's Heels" were also republished in K/S Relay #2.

This story was mentioned in The Development of the Kirk/Spock Relationship: Its Foundation in Fan-Fiction (1978).

The podcast This Week In Fandom History discussed the story in its 40th episode, "October 1976: The First Slash Fic Is Released And We All Benefit".

Description

This story is probably the first fully-developed K/S short story that was actually published. In it, Kirk, Spock, and McCoy are stranded on a planet when their shuttlecraft lands and explodes. Spock suffers from a blow to the head and is unconscious when they take shelter in a convenient cave. (Convenient caves are an amusing cliché used by many K/S writers over the past twenty-five years.) During his delirium, Spock expresses and acts on his deeply-suppressed desire for a sexual relationship with Kirk. McCoy feigns sleep, and Kirk, though initially confused, goes through with the encounter, presumably willingly. But the question is, will Spock remember when he regains consciousness?

Author's Comments

2007

I thought that was the kind of love that women really want: respect growing into love growing into desire — a relationship between equals, which is something hard to find in contemporary culture (even now, all these years later). What K/S fans really wanted was to be one of the characters and have the other. That’s why I made the stories so very subjective and internal, happening mostly inside the minds of the participants. “Shelter," written with a little help from my then roommate (I was going to school at the time), happens almost entirely from McCoy’s viewpoint and reveals his feelings toward both his friends as they go through an emotional revelation that turns into a physical encounter. Note that, though it’s obvious what’s going on, there’s nothing explicit in the whole scene; it’s all about feelings—emotions, which Spock kept trying (and failing) to bottle up throughout the whole series. Lori Chapek dared to publish “Shelter” in issue #20 (“XX”—in number, therefore in rating) of Warped Space, which made it the third K/S story ever published. Diane Marchant (“A Fragment Out Of Time”) and Gerry Downes (Alternative) had already taken much of the flak aimed at pioneers, and—seeing that K/S was now an established trend—a lot of people were willing to write LOCs saying how much they liked the story. There were also a lot of LOCs breathlessly asking: “What happened when they woke up?” So of course I felt obliged to write the sequel. Note that, again, 90% of “Poses” is about emotional jockeying about, and only the next-to-last scene gets down to anything like explicit sex. Even there, I concentrated on the feelings of the participants more than the action. In fact, one bit of advice I’d give to aspiring writers of any sort of erotica is: first plan the scene in complete detail—every touch and wheeze and thrust and gasp—and then don’t write it; instead, write what the actions make the participants think and feel. This is precisely why I jumped back and forth between deep immersion in Kirk’s viewpoint and Spock’s throughout the story. Again, critical response was overwhelmingly favorable.

2017

...what would be the big barrier to any such connection [a sexual one between Kirk and Spock]? Both of their social conditionings. How would you deal with that? And, well, the answer eventually became the plot that I came up with in “Shelter.” I thought that putting it from McCoy’s point of view—by the way...

I showed my first draft to Connie Faddis who gave me a lot of suggestions about how to make it more intense from McCoy’s point of view. She also came up with the suggestion of getting rid of the translator.

[Faddis advised to] just to make it more intensely from McCoy’s point of view and not skip around. In a short story, that was much more effective. I realized that it was a damned good point, so... I also realized that what makes a love, erotic – and this is advice I’ve given to other K/S writers since. Okay, plot out your plot. Plot out your action. Plot it in detail. Every touch and thrust and moan and twitch. And then don’t write it. Keep the detailed plot in mind, but what you write are the emotional and physical reactions to what’s happening, because that’s what really makes the story, and that seems to have worked ever since. It’s not the insert tab A into slot B and rotate. It’s important. It’s effective. It’s what the action makes the characters feel and think.

[Was I happy with how it turned out?]

I was astounded. The reaction to “Shelter” was overwhelmingly positive. There were some interesting nay votes and comments, which I had fun dueling with. I like a good, logical argument. I’m not afraid of confrontation on that. I’ve been on a few labor union picket lines. You’re not afraid of confrontation and words. Good God. But mostly, most of the reactions were overwhelmingly positive, and unfortunately, most of them insisted “What happened when they woke up? Tell us! Tell us!” So I had to write the sequel, so I wrote “Poses.”

"Shelter" in Context

For a 1999 discussion amongst three fans regarding "Shelter's" context within K/S and other Trek writing, see The Foresmutters Project: Commentary & Historical Background: Shelter by Leslie Fish.

Gallery

From "Warped Space"

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  Kirk, Spock, and McCoy in bed, illustration by Leslie Fish published in Warped Space #20

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  McCoy is hiding his face in the foreground while Spock seduces Kirk in the background, illustration by Leslie Fish published in Warped Space #20

From "Relay"

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  first page, from the story as it appeared in K/S Relay #2:

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  art by Roo in K/S Relay #2

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  art by Roo in K/S Relay #2

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  art by Roo in K/S Relay #2

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  art by Roo in K/S Relay #2

Reactions and Reviews

Unknown Date

A TOS classic. A head injury causes Spock to reveal more than intended, resulting in much angsting and ultimately hotness. Scores huge points for alien anatomy :D

The Three are trapped in a cave-in. Delirious from injuries, Spock reveals that he is in love with Kirk. While McCoy pretends not to be there, Kirk comforts Spock with sex. Spock is awfully melodramatic here, but the set-up is good and McCoy's bystander commentary is very fine, as is his martyrdom in cutting out his own translator to keep Kirk believing it was all private.

1977

I wasn't going to gush about "Shelter" and "Poses" ... but it seems appropriate, because Fish and Agostino show great psychological insight in these stories and express in fictional form the importance of integration. Spock has repressed a whole chunk of his total personality, but then so has Kirk. In Kirk's case, how ever, what has been repressed is his "feminine" side. To hold to his super-macho "Jim, the Galactic Hero" image he has denied a part of himself that cannot be denied without cost. Human beings are basically androgynous, a fact which Fish/Agostino understand very well, and the humanization of James Kirk is as important an element in the Kirk-Spock relationship stories as the change in Spock. Basically, each is helping the other along toward that integration of personality they both need. Even though Leslie Fish and Carol Hunterton have responded beautifully (WS 23) to criticism of Kirk and Spock as lovers, I feel compelled to add my two credits' worth. We hear about all different kinds of love — friendship, sexual love, love of family — between and among people, but I don't think we're talking about different things, only different manifestations of the same thing. And the boundaries which separate those manifestations are amorphous, weak and can easily become nonexistent. I think any kind of love relationship carries sexual potential; whether or not that potential becomes actualized depends on all manner of variables in conditioning, environment, etc. Bev Clark has pointed out (WS 18) that you can't judge 22nd Century people by 20th Century moral standards. As it is, twentieth century moral standards are pretty variable. Plenty of people besides myself have no trouble at all accepting a Kirk-Spock relationship of the kind described in "Poses". Anita Bryant notwithstanding, I find it hard to believe that a 22nd Century person, exposed to the variety of a galaxy-wide culture, won't be many times more liberal In these matters. In fact, one of the criticisms I have of much of Trekflc Is its tendency to give insufficient allowance for the change in mores brought about by 200 years and exposure to many alien civilizations. Granted, there will always be people whose opinions are immune to change; I still find altogether more 20th century prejudices in 22nd century minds than seems likely. I've already told you what I think of "Poses" best thing In the 'zine by far.

"Shelter" was everything I had been led to expect — a beautifully-written, tender story, done with compassion and understanding. The scene where Spock confesses his love and Kirk accepts him was really lovely. The only slight criticism is a vague uneasiness at McCoy's being turned into a reluctant Peeping-Tom, but it didn't spoil the story.

1978

Re Leslie Fish's letter in PROBE 10 [See Open Letter by Winston A. Howlett Regarding His Review of "Alternative: Epilog to Orion"]: I, for one, consider her position on the Kirk/Spock relationship totally indefensible. "In a more advanced, less-restrictive society...there's no good reason why Kirk and Spock shouldn't be lovers...after all, they do love each other." Why, I might ask, does she find it necessary in "Shelter" to explain Spock's childhood dilemmas — Amanda as the tempting, forbidden human woman? Why does she find it necessary to provide psychological 'justification' for a homosexual Kirk/Spock relationship? If there's nothing 'wrong' with such a relationship, except our current social mores, why does Fish see the need to demonstrate Spock's psychological illness? I think that self-contradictory testimony would be inadmissable in a court of law. Besides, the implications of her statement are obvious: normal, heterosexual men cannot truly love each other because they cannot share a sexual experience. Aside from the fact that this is utter nonsense, it's far from the implication Roddenberry intended for the Kirk/Spock relationship. And tell it to Starsky and Hutch! (Not to mention all men who are mutual friends.)

SHELTER traces the dreams which have been haunting Spock, and how his friend, Kirk, has "seduced me into feeling." Since it is already obvious on aired Trek episodes that Kirk does, indeed, occasionally penetrate that Super-Vulcan mask which Spock wears so well, this is not too surprising a development. On AMOK TIME we saw Spock's defenses completely crumble when he saw that his captain was not dead after all. On DEVIL IN THE DARK we see Spock become visibly disturbed when the cave-in first happens, and the Vulcan does not know Kirk's condition, or even if he is alive. There are numerous other instances when Spock will react to Kirk in a way that he would not to any of the other characters, up to, and including McCoy.

In SHELTER Spock explains through his delirium, that Kirk has not only seduced him into feeling, but has also "made me to love thee..." At this point, it could be taken for a purely platonic love that Spock refers to. However, when Spock begins to explore these feelings, and to fully explain the things which have haunted his mind, we begin to see that, yes, under those given circumstances, it could be possible . McCoy, who is also sealed in the cave, pretends to be asleep during this interlude, though he is completely aware of everything that happens. We accept, without question, that

Kirk is a very sensual man, who cares deeply for his entire crew, and especially for Spock. The captain is told by Spock, in the delirious state that he (Spock) was twice made vulnerable to Kirk, and that both times Kirk struck him, forcing his (Spock's) feelings to once again hide behind that mask. (He is, of course, speaking of THIS SIDE OF PARADISE and THE NAKED TIME). In both episodes Ne see another side of Spock, and one which Kirk must deal with harshly in order to protec his ship. Unfortunately we don't know what happens after these episodes -- when Spock must be forced realize that his soul was literally bared to Kirk, the one person in the galaxy that Spock trusts more than anyone else. and that Kirk had to (necessarily) hurt him . While Spock realizes that the harshness was necessary, he is still disturbed by the fact tha his feelings were (he was un-Vulcan), and was hurt for this vulnerability. This is the premise for SHELTER, coupled with Kirk's understanding of what those times must have done to his friend.

Poses, the sequel, deals with their feelings of guilt, turmoil, desire, and the solutions they final y come to once back on board the Both SHELTER and POSES are what could be termed "erotic realism," and are, in no way, pornographic. They keep the characters true to the characterizations we saw in aired Trek, and do not attempt to reduce Kirk/ Spock to two limp-wristed stereotypes. To date, I have read nearly every K/S story to be published, and so far I have seen only one or two minor breaches of character.

1983

Regarding [the] comment about Gayle's Cosmic Fuck series — that you wished that she had shown them freely choosing to enter into the relationship, rather than having it forced on them by the pon farr She wrote these stories before 1977 (I don't know how much earlier), and at that time hardly anyone was writing K/S and those who were, were getting blasted for it (i.e. Winston Howlett's denunciation of Gerry Downes' Alternative in Winston's zine Probe]]). At the time fen were trying to find "reasons" for K and S to get together, almost as if we had to force them together. Now, there is so much K/S, that there are some stories out that have them falling in to bed together for the first time with hardly any motivation whatsoever. Of course, these are the badly written stories. I do think that you have to show some motivation in terms of something that happens in their lives which changes them in some way, so that they decide to enter into the relationship, but I do agree that it doesn't have to be forced. Leslie Fish in effect "forced" Kirk to enter the relationship with Spock in "Shelter" by having Spock semi-conscious and very vulnerable. The way she wrote it, they wouldn't have become involved, if Spock had been in his conscious mind. But, there again, Leslie wrote this over six years ago. A lot has happened in K/S and in fandom in the intervening years.

1984

"Shelter" takes place after a shuttlecraft accident maroons Kirk, Spock, and McCoy temporarily. It describes the feelings and motivations of Kirk, who comforts and ultimately is seduced by a wounded, concussed and delirious Spock, while McCoy, an unwilling witness, pretends sleep. It is beautifully and tersely written. Read it if you haven't already done so!

1985

I noted that McCoy was rather psychoanalytic in "Shelter". This is an uncharacteristic approach for him. He usually relies more on observation and experience than Freudian theory. In fact, I'd regard McCoy as more Client-Centered than Freudian.

In any case, I'm sure I'd be as enthusiastic about Shelter and Poses as nearly everyone else if I'd read them earlier. They are good stories, but they don't compare well with a masterpiece like "This Deadly Innocence".

1993

The first K/S story I ever read was Shelter, by Leslie Fish. And believe me, I would have hurled the zine across the room if it been mine to hurl. Aha! But why would I have done it? Not because I didn't believe, but because I did. Before reading Shelter, my only exposure to the notion of K/S had come from the "Phoenix" books, by Sondra Marshak & Myrna Culbreath, and it wasn't the kind of "exposure" I wanted. In short, though I found the books enjoyable overall, I didn't believe what they were trying to tell me between those professionally-written lines. There was something in the Phoenix books that made me squirm — and not in the same way Shelter made me squirm. The Phoenix books made me uncomfortable, argumentative, and downright bitchy whenever I encountered the concept of K/S. Though, like I said, they're great books in and of themselves.

[snipped]

In all fairness, of course, perhaps the Phoenix books would have affected me in the same way Shelter did had they been done as fanzines, without the need to write between the lines rather than on the lines. All I know is that reading the Phoenix books originally turned me into what's known nowadays as a "rabid anti-K/Ser". You see, the Phoenix books didn't convince me that Kirk and Spock might be lovers, or at the very least, were involved in some pretty kinky pastimes in the privacy of their own thoughts. Shelter, on the other hand, more than convinced me. And I, a stubborn, starry-eyed, 22-year-old girl, didn't want to be convinced. I kicked and I screamed and I yowled — my heroes wouldn't do this! But... Leslie made me believe they would. She made me know they would by showing me how it was possible - which is the mark of a good writer. (And when I got through kicking, screaming and yowling, I went straight to my friend's zine collection and promptly devoured all the K/S I could get my hands on — which, back in those days, wasn't a lot. But it was enough to get me started on the way to delightful perversion, where I've lived happily ever since...).

1995

I've seen McCoy does accept the K/S relationship and can be fiercely loyal in its defense. He usually exhibits less homophobia than either Kirk or Spock often show. This is probably because his training has made him more objective about sexuality. Yet in "Shelter" (originally in WARPED SPACE 20 and reprinted in K/S RELAY 3) by Leslie Fish, McCoy is far from professionally objective. He utilizes Freudian analysis to attempt to determine the causes of Spock's attraction to Kirk. I find this speculative psychoanalysis patronizing and oppressive. McCoy never asks himself why he prefers women. Heterosexuality is not seen as mysterious or in need of investigation. It is homosexuality that needs to be explained. The fact is that no one fully understands how people come to have any sexual preference. Any objective treatment of the question would recognize this. "Shelter" is deservedly regarded as a classic, but the story would be even better if McCoy showed any realization that homosexuality isn't a special case whose etiology needs to be determined like an illness.

1996

...Shelter was the first slash I ever read, and for years was the story I loaned people interested in slash. It was the first 'cave' story (so good it launched an embarrassing number of pale imitators), and just generally wonderful. I can still remember my full body cringe of reading McCoy digging in his own arm without anesthesia to remove the language implant. (And yeah, before anyone says anything--it is way sweet, and not very representative of my favorite type of stories now, 14 years later...)

1999

I remember reading "Shelter" in WS20 and going crazy waiting for the sequel to come out. As usual for many stories of this type, it ended with the "mating" and there was no discussion of the "aftermath". And in this case, since Spock was "out of his mind" during the mating, it was logical that we fen were going "bug-fuck nuts!" waiting for the sequel to find out how both Kirk and Spock would feel later, on the Big E, when they were both in their "right minds".

When "Poses" finally came out and I read it, I was somewhat disappointed. I felt that one of the characters (I think it was McCoy) was REALLY out of character (the way I conceptualized him). But I WAS relieved to FINALLY read the sequel.

Oh, yes, "Shelter" and "Poses". I liked the former much more than the latter. In "Poses" there is real sex, but it almost read tongue-in-cheek, and I remember Leslie later saying she was poking fun at the idea of romance in that story (I remember she wrote a commentary once where she said she detested the word "romance". Ah, a kindred spirit.... <g>)

Well, I was really pleased when [K B] lent me these [Shelter and Poses], as I have suddenly developed an interest in the history of K/S. I have to say that I was not disappointed, both these stories were interesting and thought provoking. The first story “Shelter” is mostly from McCoy’s POV and involves them taking shelter in, guess what—a cave! Spock has been injured and becomes delirious and in his fevered ramblings the truth about his feelings for Kirk emerge, and Kirk’s comforting of Spock evolves into something more. One of the interesting ideas in this story is that the love scene is described almost entirely in sound, which works pretty well though I did wonder just how good McCoy’s sense of hearing could possibly be! I thought the voice of Spock’s delirious mind was really well captured and it’s an interesting idea although I have read other excellent stories based on that idea I assume this was one of the earliest.

2002

One of the first 'cave' stories in slash fanfic, and it still stands up well. Spock's anguished cry of: "Oh friend, my friend, thee has caused me to love thee, and now what shall I do?" is a strong enough line to resonate in the mind, despite the misuse of the second person singular.

Told from the point of view of McCoy, shocked to hear a feverish Spock confess his feelings under the influence of physical strain. It's really half a story--what might they feel when they have to confront their feelings back on shipboard?

2005

A very early piece, from 1976, this story and its sequel are interesting because they avoid many of the cliches of later K/S while establishing others. The setting - Kirk and Spock stranded in a cave, with Spock injured and McCoy a reluctant bystander, is practically the stuff of parody. Yet some details, such as Spock's interesting anatomical differences (he is half-alien, after all!) are fresh and intriguing. The story is well-written, if a bit overwrought; while modern stories take for granted that Kirk and Spock could be attracted to each other and act on that attraction, this story has to establish that premise from ground zero. An interesting and worthwhile read - read the commentary and historical background, as well.

2009

Reccing because of the sheer HISTORY of this, but also because it's good. I don't like it's sequel Poses at all (with the exception of the weirdest and most intriguing portrayal of Vulcan anatomy to date) but this one is the cliche goodness of pon farr and it was the first known K/S fic.

2011

I absolutly love this story and have saved it to my laptop to read it again at some later point. Although at times I wasn't a hundred percent sure what was going on ( like why Kirk was crying) I know that's because it's from McCoy's veiwpoint and that little sense of not knowing dousn't in any way ruin the story. The dialouge is more like that of the original serises than any other story that I've read so far and the "I think I'm going to faint ... thought McCoy" line made me laugh. I'm getting ready to read the sequel now.

This is wonderful, tender and erotic and moving. You write beautifully, thank you for this.

Can you say "awkward"? 0_o haha at some points I couldnt tell if this was a comedy or not because of Bones' awkward third-wheelness but dont get me wrong, it was beautifully written and very touching and I loved it! but ohmygod thirdwheel!bones was pretty fantastic!

Oh, this is wonderful. Simply amazing. I've been a Star Trek fan for a long time thanks to my parents, but never grew up with the show or experienced early fanfiction like this firsthand. I'm so grateful that you decided to upload it for us unfortunate younger generations. I love the way you told the story from Bones' perspective because of his insights into both Kirk and Spock's feelings. Definitely a unique and effective technique. I love the tenderness between Spock and Jim as well. You capture their emotions so beautifully.

2012

I LAUGHED MY ASS OFF THROUGH THIS ENTIRE THING, MCCOY'S PRESENCE'S THERE WHEN JIM STARTED CRYING, EVERYTHING BONES THOUGHT, JIM CRYING AND MCCOY DIGGING OUT THE CHIP! I'm sorry I just LOVED it, I can't begin to explain how pleasurable it was to read this. I honestly was imagining they'd get beamed aboard in the potition of Jim and Spock getting it on and Mccoy facing the other way and pretending to sleep, TRY JOURNALING THAT KIRK. I apologize once more this is just too hilarious! Thank you, with endless enthusiasm THANKYOU, thank you for Mccoy the awkward situation and the humor.

2013

I read this on the K/S archive and just loved it; I'm saving it to favorites here in the hope that others might notice the powerful piece and give it the attention it deserves!

Oh my god, this was amazing...! One of the most incredible pieces of fanfiction I have ever come across. Original pairings are indeed in a totally different league that the newer ones...! All the feelings and the fears and the fluff that are thrown and scattered in here, so spontaneous and yet so precise in their purpose. I went from the point of almost crying to "awww" and "oh, damn!" one too many times...! And I absolutely loved Bones! Now, that is a true friend. In a kind of selflessly disturbed, self-distructive, and maybe a bit patronizing way, yes, but a true friend...! I wonder what happens afterwards... Thank you for this piece!

2014

How sad to experience first love in this way. I can see what will happen when Spock arises: will not remember a thing or deny, but will return to old ways ... how painful it would be Jim, and perhaps also for himself. How noble by McCoy.

2019

So full of passion! You are a very talented writer!

2021

3/5: I have a lot of mixed feelings about this one. The writing itself isn't too bad, though I have definitely read better, and the characterisation is pretty on point for a lot of it. Unfortunately, Bones psycoanalyses his friends using Freud, in a way that very much does not line up with our modern knowledge of psychology. It's also unclear just how consentual the sex is. Clearly, Spock can't consent because he's concussed and thinks he's dreaming the entire time, and Jim seems to enjoy it but he cries afterwards and claims he "had to do it". Definitely not vibing with that. Still, it's a piece of history, and if you feel you can handle the things mentioned previously, it might be worth a read.

2022

This fanfiction is older than my mother holy shit

What an excellent fic! I have a fondness for hurt!Spock and Jim (and Bones!) taking care of him. I love your decision to write this from Bones' point of view, although I did have to feel sorry for him being put in such an awkward position (I did also feel a little sorry for Jim and Spock and their awkward positions, but at least they got love out of it!) I adore the detail of him destroying his translator so that neither of them would realise he'd lied about overhearing the whole thing. I can't wait to read the sequel!

2023

Thank you for sharing this fic! A now ex friend/partner of mine told me about this one years ago, and I'm only now getting round to reading i

I barely need to read this as I pretty much know it by heart. I DID read Shelter more than forty years ago when shipping zines by post was a hazardous business Customs wise. The comments about it being as old as someone's mother and the tropes made me laugh. For the life of me I cannot remember how I ever came to read it. There was no internet so how did I find out about K/S at all? Anyway, it was the first Star Trek fan fiction I ever read. What a start! But it's true...the same issues are still being considered, the same tropes apply forty odd years on. It's just that you must have been one of the first and the story still endures. Lovely to see it here.

Awwww, thank you. Glad I could be of help. Yes, I was one of the first 3 writers to tackle the subject, but once the floodgates were opened, it became a common topic. HOw times have changed! --Leslie <;)))><

Tumblr directed me to this part of fandom history. I was born 1976 (and I consider myself quite old for it 😃) Anyway, I really liked your writing and this story in general and your description of Spocks vulcan-style supressed feelings, Kirks reaction and most of all I think McCoys acceptance or rather (if hidden / internal) encouragement.

I have one question though: I strongly feel that more recent stories with a similar plot would focus a bit on the sex being non-consensual because Spock had a concussion and was not able to control his actions and be his typical stoical vulcan self? does he know later what happened? I can imagine him being rather put out with himself about behaving like this. I got the impression he wasn‘t very fond of his human side? Or would he consider it illogical not embracing the whole of what he is? Where things like discussed then in fandom circles? Tbh I’m not really into K/S or Star Trek TOS but I think I recognize the taboo it was 40 years ago writing about queer relationships, and I thank you for doing so and by this paving the way for all fan artist and their arts (queer or otherwise) that came after your story. Fandom spaces are comfort spaces for thousands of people, myself included.

On a side note: I *love* the tropes in this story, shelter in a cave with a hint of „only one sleeping bag“ and „huddling together for warmth“. One of the first fanfics I read about 25 years ago was a „Tom Paris / B‘Elanna Torres survived a shuttle crash and took shelter in a cave“ - so it was at least in the same universe ☺️ Anyway, please forgive my rambling. All the best for you and thank you again!!!

Wow!! What a beautiful piece of fandom history! This was amazing, Author! You did such a wonderful job expressing things from McCoy's POV, and all the dialogue feels so uniquely like all the characters. Love the decision McCoy made regarding the translator and all his internal monologuing. I especially enjoyed how you gave readers just enough details to know what was going on while also having the POV character (McCoy) try to offer them some kind of privacy.

2024

This work is an absolute cornerstone of the Premise! I'm so glad that you shared it online, so the younger generation of trekkies can read it too. It is so touching and beautiful.

This is such an important part of the fandom history, I would love to share it with my fellow Russian-speaking trekkies! Mind if I translate this gem into Russian?

Thank you greatly. Yes, of course you may translate it into Russian; I hope the attitudes and subtleties translate clearly. Good luck, and best wishes. --Leslie <;)))><

"Oh holy Freud!" 🤣🤣

Poor McCoy, first feeling left out and then having to suffer through unintentional voyeurism and the consequence of well-intentioned lying.

oh my goodness, this is so good.

i'm only 24 but i've been reading fic since i was 10, and i love learning about fandom history and really love k/s. i'm so glad you took the time to post this to AO3!

TOS is a comfort show of mine and i can totally see how the relationship between kirk and spock became so popular. and your characterization! it's so good. i could hear the characters' voices in my head while reading.

I may be one of the few reading this on Ao3 who remembers reading it in a fanzine in 1976. I am so amazed to find it here on Ao3. And what's also amazing is how good a story it is; re-reading it now more nearly fifty years later has not diminished it in any way. Bravo, @LeslieFish.