Harry Potter and the Psychic Serpent

Zine
Title:	Harry Potter and the Psychic Serpent
Publisher:
Editor:
Author(s):	B.L. Purdom
Cover Artist(s):	Leela Starsky
Illustrator(s):
Date(s):	on Fiction Alley (May 19-September4, 2001), Agent with Style as print: 2005
Series?:	yes
Medium:	online, print zine
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Genre:	het, f/m
Fandom:	Harry Potter
Language:	English
External Links:	online version; archive link (where it has 1,933 comments)
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cover by Leela Starsky

Harry Potter and the Psychic Serpent is a het Harry Potter novel in two volumes by B.L. Purdom. The first volume has 186 pages, the second one has 189 pages, for a total page count of 375.

The ships are Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione. It is a fifth year fic and part of a series that spans Harry's sixth and seventh year as well.

Summary

In Harry’s fifth year at Hogwarts, he gets a snake with the Sight; Hermione’s torn between Ron and Harry, who's torn between her and Ginny, who's torn between him and Draco Malfoy, who's torn between her and loyalty to his father. Voldemort may be trying to recruit Harry now instead of killing him, and there are giants and house elves and a Duelling Club.

Psychic Serpent "Trilogy"

The total page count of all three volumes is 670. Each volume continues the pagination from the previous one. For example, the third volume ("Triangle Prophecy") contains pages 442-662.

The main three volumes are:

• Harry Potter and the Psychic Serpent
• Harry Potter and the Time of Good Intentions
• Harry Potter and the Triangle Prophecy

Prequel and related:

• The Lost Generation (The Lost Generation is a prequel, i.e. it was published after the others, though chronologically it happens before. But the first in the series is Psychic Serpent. )
• Replay (While the story is not directly part of the Psychic Serpent series, the novel Replay takes place in the setting created by the author.)

The Author Looks Back

At any rate, in observance of the tenth anniversary of the first fic, starting on the day I began posting it in 2001 (somewhere around the third week of May--I'll check the exact date before I begin), I'll post about what I posted on that day on the day I originally posted it. Sort of an annotated version of the fic without putting in footnotes or scribbles in the margins. Now, I expect to be doing a fair bit of face-palming during this process. When I was interviewed about the trilogy by the Potterfic Weekly folks last year I replied perfectly honestly, "Yeah, when I reread some of the early chapters I do wonder now, 'What was I thinking?' about some things." I'm the last person to believe anything I've written is sacrosanct. That was part of what made it such a valuable learning experience for me. And now I can look back and laugh and marvel at what an innocent I was. (Oh my GOD, chapter five. CHAPTER FIVE. WHAT WAS I THINKING?)...

About Its History with Agent With Style

This series of zines has a complicated history with its one-time publisher, Agent With Style. See: Blueprint(s) for Disaster - The Saga of Me and Agent with Style (AWS), ^{Archived version}, accessed 5.11.2011

Fan Comments

Early 2000s

The 'Psychic Serpent' Series - And here's another long-ass story that's so complicated that you'll lose track of little details until they appear 30 chapters later. Seriously-this whole story is so intricate and moving and just wonderful. I wasn't hooked at first-I'm not a big fan of Hermione/Harry, and that's practically the first paragraph. But once you get into it...wow. This is a bit of a spoiler, but they don't *stay* together-Hermione ends up with who she really belongs with (in my opinion, of course). The entire story focuses on Harry's POV (like canon), and Barb has the excellent ability to keep him completely in character. Be forewarned-only go here if you enjoy a long story. I mean, really long-you won't finish in one sitting. Each chapter is, as I think she put it once, 30 Microsoft Word pages long. The first three stories are part of the trilogy, and 'The Lost Generation' goes back in time to the MWPP years. Everything fits so perfectly, too-her OC's are all blended very well with the established canon characters. Really, if you have loads of time, go and get into this. I found myself thinking about this story when I was in the middle of 'Time of Good Intentions' (my favorite part of the trilogy), and that, my friend, is the sign that a story has really got you by the balls. If, of course, you have them. :)

2010

[vick86]
The Psychic Serpent trilogy is one of the best examples of Growing the Beard in fanfiction. The first book does suffer from a number of bad (Harry Potter) fanfiction cliches. This is to be forgiven however when one considers that this is one of the earlier book-length works and most of the cliches weren't cliches when it was written, but rather became cliches after other works started using some of the same ideas. The second book throws the AU curveball and it turns into one of the best series you'll ever read. It's definitely worth it to sit through some of the bad stuff in the first book to reach the greatness of the sequels

A 2019 Discussion

This fan discussion is located here: Reddit - Dive into anything, ^{Archived version}

I wanted to discuss the Trilogy in the title by Barb LP. This trilogy got me reading fanfics 5 or so years ago. I thought they were very well written and enjoyed them immensely. I held them for a long time as my favorites. I’ve been meaning to go back and read them over again but just haven’t gotten to it. As such they may not be as great as I remember. However, I have noticed that no one seems to ever recommend the works. Why is that? Was I the only one that liked them? They have a lot of favorites, so have they just been forgotten?

One things that I really liked about them was that the final 2 books came out before the real books. To be honest, I did not like the direction the last 2 canon books went and find this trilogy to be much preferable.

Two things that I recall that would I would recommend this series for is:

A realistically redeemed Draco Malfoy

While I HATED it at the time (emotionally) the ending is a huge twist and singularly unique.

Maybe a lot of people don't read it, because the topic is already pretty far out there and not everbody's cup of tea? I know I'd never click on it

Yeah I guess the description isn’t very good. Really it is just his last 3 years at Hogwarts but without canon rehash because there was no canon

I dropped it after a couple of chapters, and suspect that the people who praise it read it as their first fic and thus see it through nostalgia goggles.

The PS trilogy is a mixed bag. The first book is a standard 6.5/10 post-GoF fic. Good, but nothing special.

The 2nd book (HP & The Time of Good Intentions) is, in my opinion, a masterpiece. It's raw, full of emotionally charged powerful moments, danger lurks at every turn, nobody is who they seem to be. 14 years later I can still clearly remember my emotional state when I read it for the first time. The pacing, plot & characterization are masterful. The fic's only bad point is the ending, which is, admittedly, very cheap.

The 3rd book is again good (imho better than PS), perhaps a 7.5/10. It does well in wrapping up almost all plot points and gives closure for most characters. Of course once again the ending fucks everything up. This is more of a personal peeve, as I generally view sacrificial endings very negatively (icluding canon), more so when they occur to "save" unworthy bags of dirt.

Thanks for sharing your opinion. I also liked the second book best. The whole time you are like WTF is going on. Why is Harry working with Voldemort!

Yeah I hate endings like that. What on earth is the point of me caring for him for 750k words if everything was for nothing!

I've never heard of it but I'm interested now so I'll give it a shot. I will say that it seems like the older fics, particularly ones written before the final book just aren't recommended often in general

Cool, I’m glad to here you are going to read it. I hope you enjoy it. I guess since people know what happens now the old stories can seem silly. I still like them because they have a greater chance of being original and not a canon rehash. I guess the old stories can also forget to add content and stick with the same 10 spells

It's definitely worth a read.

The most impressive part of the trilogy was that it was completed before its counterparts in the canon series. These days, fics that use the same techniques, similar plots, and same ships feel played out and unimaginitive.

Back then, Barb's trilogy was groundbreaking, and in some ways, made me disappointed as fuck when Rowling's books 5-7 dropped because I'd already read something that was outright superior.

Barb also managed to 'call' a few plots that I just did not see coming in canon back before OotP dropped. When she put out ToGI, I was all 'well, interesting use of a side character, but no way Harry actually gets together with Ginny, she barely even exists in canon.' And then with TP 'A prophecy? I thought that was a throwaway gimmick. Doubt we'll see Rowling pull that out in canon.'

We know how that shit went.

Barb even outdoes Rowling on the low end. If you thought canon Voldemort's defeat was a bit of a letdown, wait until you see what does Barb's Voldemort in.

But as for why it doesn't get recced as much? Maybe most current readers don't even know it was the hottest shit ever at one point. I mean, the series completed in like 2003-2004? It's almost fifteen years later, I can't even name a dozen fics from that far back, and I've been reading HP fanfiction for about that long.

I started it but stopped because I didn't understand the actions and feelings of the characters, for me they were not logical. (I stopped sometime after Dudley died?!) What I do remember and took from this story was the Welsh Lullaby, I looked it up and fell in love with the song. Can't speak Welsh but I can sing that song :)

I have tried reading that Lost Generation prequel, but it was really badly written and I dropped it.

Me neither. I didn’t even try to read it though because I’ve never been interested in Marauder gen fics

A Fan Compares Rowling's Books, and Two Fanfics

In 2017, Shelly Zhang posted at twitter: "Friend is reading Harry Potter for the first time. He suddenly realizes he's read a fanfiction Order of the Phoenix instead of the real one." -- excerpt from text exchange

In 2005, a fan compared the original Harry Potter series by J.K. Rowling, the fanfiction The Draco Trilogy (by Cassandra Claire), and "Harry Potter and the Psychic Serpent" fanfiction series:

I've long been a fan of Barb Purdom's psychic serpent series, and a friend just recommended to me the cassandra's draco series. So I downloaded them all last Sunday and blasted through them in the space of a week. I'm just curious how many people on this board have read both fics, and what they think of them comparatively. As far as I can tell they are the two most popular Harry Potter fanfics. Anyway, I figured I'd give my impressions both as a first time reader and as a fan of the other series.

The first thing is of course that I could not put the stories down. I absolutely had to continue reading them until I finished them (I was the same for the Psychic serpent series and for the cannon books so no difference there). However, it was more a desperate desire to see what happened next rather than the fact that I was actually enjoying what I was reading so much. Several things made the draco series both somewhat tedious as well as riveting.

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Where plot is concerned it is somewhat of a mix, both when it comes to relationships and as far as main story. Relationships are generally well examined once they are begun. Draco's relationship with Harry is by far the best non-romantic relationship I have ever read, well developed, intriguing, and real. In truth, it is the main point of the latter two stories. Harry's relationship with Hermione is done fairly well, and Draco's relationship with Ginny is suitably complex. However, the starting points of these relationship are rather vague and unbeleivable, especially Harry and Hermione. After all, they are supposed to be the main romantic relationship, and they are in love long before the story begans, with little or no explaination why (and what explanation there is blatantly contradicts everything in canon). Why they are in love, and how they came to be in love, is extremely confusing, especially from Harry's perspective. Draco and Ginny is a little easier to see the developement. The beginning of Harry and Draco's friendship is also a bit confusing. The physical aspects to the relationships (or lack thereoff) are handled well throughout. Truth be told, Barb does romantic relationships far better. All the relationships by the end feel extremely real and right, and the various developements pluck at the heartstrings in all the right ways. (Though the sex in Barb's series is a bit overdone in the first book). I challenge anyone to find a more moving relationship than Harry and Ginny in Time of Good Intentions (also, btw, the only book ever that has made me nearly cry).

As far as main story plot is concerned, it goes from conherent but simple (Draco Dormiens) to unneccarily twisted but nonetheless riveting and well done (Draco Sinister {There at least four story arcs that were completely irrelevant and should have been cut out}) to somewhat drawn out but nonetheless clear, well developed, and interesting (Draco Veritas). Certainly the what's gonna happen next effect is extremely well done, far more so than almost any other books ive ever read. The sixth month wait time must be killer, though I have just begun to experience it. Barb was a lot better at turning out material faster, but her cliffhangers tended to annoy the hell out of you during the wait. The one big plothole I noticed though is that how in the hell does everyone seem to know that harry is the one to kill voldemort? No prophecies are given, and no reason to suspect this either, yet everyone from dumbledore to harry himself seems to know that it's his job and his alone.

As far as characters are concerned, the developement and realism is generally excellent though often out of character. Draco is of course wildly out of character (despite all the fanfiction authors out there, Draco was clearly, even after only the fourth book, an git with no redeaming qualities whatsoever, with no chance of redemption or change, and with no complexity either, just a simple evil foil for Harry. People just took the mysterious bishounen thing/crush on Tom Felton and ran with it}). Nonetheless, both Barb and Cassandra have taken a simple character and made him their own, and Cassandra's version is extremely well developed and vivid (as he should be, being the main character). We feel is ups and downs, his confusion, his pain. A bit too angsty but nonetheless far more well done than JKR's fifth book Harry (whom by the end I wanted wring his whiny little neck) and Barb's Draco (who is also complex but a lot less developed). On the other hand though, I think Cassandra's Harry is the best character of all, managing to make him human and fallible and at the same time the character we all identify with. It is perhaps the most natural and real developement I've seen of JKR's fourth book Harry including JKR's own developement. His developement as a hero oddly enough makes him more real than ever, and if there was ever a character you wanted more to succeed, I haven't found him. Ginny is also well done, by far the most interesting female character in the series. Hermione is a bit out of character, she seems to have lost her bossy self by the beginning of DD, and never really comes into her own except that everyone seems to be in love with for reasons that are described (vitality etc.) but that she never seems to actually exhibit. Ron recedes to the backround and becomes nearly irrelevant, and the attempt to make him relevant at the end of DV is contrived. Dumbledore also seems to have become irrelevant and fades back as an imporant character. Same with Sirius and Lupin. The vilians are well done, Voldemort and Slytherin are both suitably evil though in satisfying different ways. The complete discarding of Voldemort in DS was a bit jarring though. On a side note, I'm glad she didn't succumb to the temptation to make Harry and Draco super muscular (ala Barb) but the Draco as a sex god thing is a bit annoying.

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Well that's all for now, and in final judgement I still have to say the nod goes to Barb's psychic serpent series, mostly because what she wrote comes together as a coherent whole, a true trilogy of three books. When you finish everything is clear yet complex, whereas the Draco series is a bit muddy and vague (and not in a good, complex literature way but in a poor writing kind of way) and I doubt finishing the series will change that. The draco series reads like a bunch of connected short stories squashed together, rather than a coherent whole. And Barb's writing style is far superior, and in the end that trumps the perhaps superior individual characteristics, because it helps define in what truly makes a better book: I just had more fun reading it. Sorry. I'd love to see what you guys think, and please other people read the pyschic serpent series, compare them, and tell me what you think.