Equilibrium (Star Trek: TOS story by PSW)

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Title: Equilibrium
Author(s): PSW
Date(s): 2014 - 2015
Length: 152,047 words
Genre(s): Gen, Kidnapping, Whump
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External Links: FFN
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"illustration of one hand holding the wrist of another which is dripping blood, on a starry background. Text reads 'Star Trek Equilibrium, McCoy's transport is destroyed in what appears to be a containment field explosion, leaving no known survivors. The truth, however, is not so simple as that ..., A novel by PSW'"
Cover art by carbongrunge (2024)

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Equilibrium is a McCoy focused Star Trek: TOS story by PSW.

It is often recced as a "must read" for McCoy fans, and it often compared to the official tie-in novels for quality and length.

Summary

Author's Summary

McCoy's transport is destroyed in what appears to be a containment field explosion, leaving no known survivors. The truth, however, is not so simple as that ...

Story Summary

McCoy is kidnapped by non-federation aliens. They force McCoy to work for them, and medically treat captured Vulcans and Romulans. McCoy struggles to treat those in his care, to try and find a way to escape, all while his own well-being deteriorates. Meanwhile, it has been reported to the Enterprise that McCoy died during an explosion, and Kirk and Spock struggle with their grief at the loss of their friend.

Coda

The author also wrote a short one-shot follow up to the story called Peaches and Tolik Blossoms.

Reactions and Reviews

2016

Re-reading Star Trek:TOS fic linkffn(Equilibrium by PSW) and was reminded of why I loved it in the first place. The plot/action is compelling and well-paced, and I love how the plot itself sets up some character study - how off-balance Kirk and Spock are without McCoy, and how much he needs them. Watching McCoy function and make tough decisions on his own is really awesome and is done so well. Plus, he's thrown in with a bunch of Vulcans, so that had to be interesting.

Everyone is in-character, even the Romulans, which is hard to do. My only complaint is the character of Trella - I understood why it was important to focus on her, to show McCoy’s importance, but I still felt she was the weak point. That could just be me, though.

All in all, definitely worth your time.[1]

2018

listen I have read a lot of Star Trek novels and I’m here to tell you that this fic is the best Star Trek novel I’ve ever read. the triumvirate bonds (and suffers), Bones gets to be absolutely kickass awesome, it will have you on the edge of your seat for chapter after chapter, and it feels amazingly true to the series but also takes the time to delve into the characters’ emotions and reactions in a way that TOS never really did but should have. basically it’s the TOS novel I always truly wanted.[2]

2019

Everyone reading this, drop what you’re doing and read “Equilibrium” by PSW right now. I’ll wait. It’s only 150,000 words. It’s also an absolutely remarkable achievement in TOS fanfiction that is probably my favourite Trek thing ever, or at least way up there, and I’m talking canon included. Featuring: Bones being kidnapped and presumed dead! Bones actually being awesome and brilliant and facing complex moral dilemmas! Spock and Kirk trying to deal without Bones and failing in surprising ways and learning about themselves in the process! Spectacular Triumvirate feels, both apart and together! A new alien civilization that feels fleshed out and fascinating, and a layered plot that works, and a super satisfying ending with a final line that’s sure to make you smile.[3]

2020

Y’all this fic is GOOD. Like holy shit. I caught myself wanting to write fanfic for it before I remembered that it itself is fanfic and not canon. Starts off with McCoy and others being kidnapped and their deaths faked. Spock and the rest of the Enterprise are grieving (and my heart breaks every time.) Meanwhile, McCoy is being forced to engineer a treatment for captive Vulcans, Romulans, and Rigelians who are being subjected to some really awful stuff–but I won’t spoil it for you. I will say though that this fic brings out a mixture of emotions, from anger and disbelief to excitement and absolute relief. Like edge-of-your-seat action. This is not a Spones fic but the Spock/McCoy friendship is strong and central to the fic’s resolution. A must for McCoy fans cause he’s just so good in this fic. The OCs are great as well, you find yourself caring about them a lot.[4]

2021

long tos fic about McCoy being kidnapped by aliens and the Enterprise crew thinks he died !! again some of the best characterization I’ve ever read. And a really cool exploration into the Bones & Spock friendship. Highly recommend. I seriously can’t rec this author enough all their stuff is amazing.[5]

If there’s anyone who hasn’t read the fic Equilibrium by PSW, then I highly recommend it. It’s a long one at over 150,000 words, but it is a freakin’ excellent fic that outright fees like an actual novel. Especially if you’re a McCoy fan, this is a worthwhile read![6]

sometimes a 150K star trek fic can be so personal…[7]

2022

My favourite trek fic (not counting the actual Trek novels) of all time is PSW's novel-length Equilibrium, which I firmly believe every TOS fan -- and especially every McCoy fan -- should read. Start there, and then keep going.[8]

This is more of a modern classic considering how old the Trek fandom is. This is essential reading if you are a McCoy fan. It is novel length and as good as any of the tie-in novels I have read. As far as I know it has not inspired any fanworks, but it damn well should have.[9]

2023

Listen if you like TOS and are up to read what is essentially a short book then read Equilibrium by PSW on Ao3. Absolutely fantastic piece of work, I have nothing but praise for it and have already left a very long comment on it. Outstanding work, beautiful writing and characterization, just read this fucking story if you want a good one[10]

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