on my lips (your laughter is the sweetest)
| Fanfiction | |
|---|---|
| Title: | on my lips (your laughter is the sweetest) |
| Author(s): | luway |
| Date(s): | 08 October 2018 |
| Length: | 7,089 words, 1 chapter |
| Genre(s): | Alternate Universe - Coffee Shops & Cafés, Deaf Character, Meet-Cute, Friends to Lovers, Jisung Makes a Fool Out of Himself, Fluff, Angst, Kissing |
| Fandom(s): | Stray Kids |
| Relationship(s): | |
| External Links: | AO3, Archived version |
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on my lips (your laughter is the sweetest) is a Minsung short story written by luway.
This fic has been translated into Russian, Archived version by _stfu_honey_ aka mean_son1744.
Author's Notes
"I am not deaf, but loss of hearing and deafness runs in my family (and is something I am experiencing already myself) so I was able to do my own research with my family members while writing this (which btw was an amazing experience). anyways, hope you enjoyed reading!"[1]
Contents
Summary
"Jisung cleared his throat, a sudden feeling of embarrassment coming over him. He stared at the paper cup in his hands as he spoke. 'So you're really nice and all, and your cocoa is amazing, but the whole lip thing— I can see you staring when I talk and I just wanted to say it's kind of uncom-'
'Uh sorry, strange question, but could you look up at me?' Minho suddenly asked. 'I need to read your lips or else I can't really understand what you're saying.'
aka Jisung asks barista Minho to stop staring at his lips, not realizing Minho is deaf, and kind of has to.
Minho thinks Jisung's lips are pretty"[1]
Writing Style
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Quotes
Turns out Jisung is crying, but only a little bit. One or two more tears have slipped out since Minho hugged him. Jisung looks down and wipes them away, laughter coming out in breathy gasps as he sniffles and tries his best to look okay, and not like his entire world had just been imploding less than five minutes before.
Fifteen minutes later and Jisung’s heart has yet to calm itself, and if you were to look closely, you would see that Jisung’s lips are slightly more red than usual. His lower lip tingles as he runs his tongue over the seam of his lips. The taste of Minho’s peach soda is there, and he feels a small burst of satisfaction.
Reception
Reactions and Reviews
both of my parents are deaf and like i don't usually like reading fics like this bc they always get it drastically wrong. neither of my parents feel bad about being deaf and I don't think I've ever met someone who does yet fics ALWAYS make it out like being deaf is the worst thingit's not. so i really liked your writing and gosh i hope you have a good day.
And how Minho asked if he can kiss Jisung?? MY HEART SWELLED THIS FFIC BURST UWUSSSS!!! Thanks for taking the time to write this amazing masterpiece, Author-nim. I also feel like I wanna start learning sign language as well!! I love it sooo much!!
i thought your writing was so lovely, it felt light and gentle...
I mean you write soooo freaking well! Wow! This whole book had me smiling like an idiot. God! You are an amazing writer. Your choice of words and framing sentences is impeccable.
I'm a hard of hearing stay - you have no idea how many times I've read this. Seriously, thank you thank you thank you.
Oh my god that was the cutest thing I've read in a while. This story really resonated with me as I'm planning on studying Audiology, so I have to get integrated with the community. This story was very eye opening and gave me a perspective I've never had before so THANK YOU
Fanworks and Fan Activity
Fanart
- sitting in a Café I found it only appropriate to draw a scene from my fav Minsung fic, Archived version by briee-elle, published 05 December 2018
References
- ^ a b luway (08 October 2018). "on my lips (your laughter is the sweetest)". AO3 (Fanfiction). Archived from the original on 02 August 2024.
{{cite web}}: Check date values in:|date=and|archive-date=(help)[1] - ^ this was so cute!! the plot is amazing and aidjfj the way you write is just A+, Archived version (08 October 2018)
- ^ Can I just say how ADORABLE THIS IS????, Archived version (14 October 2018)
- ^ oh my gosh ㅠ.ㅠ, Archived version (02 November 2018)
- ^ You are awesome!!, Archived version (11 May 2021)
- ^ Seriously, thank you thank you thank you., Archived version (11 May 2023)
- ^ Oh my god that was the cutest thing I've read in a while., Archived version (11 March 2024)
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