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On Which to Build

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Title: On Which to Build
Author(s): Rosemarie Heaton
Date(s): 1997
Length:
Genre(s): slash
Fandom(s): Star Trek: TOS
Relationship(s): Kirk/Spock
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On Which to Build is a Kirk/Spock story by Rosemarie Heaton.

It was published in the print zine First Time #45.

Summary

"On a diplomatic mission, Spock is raped when he and Kirk are attacked by a roving band of thugs and later, Spock is taken to Vulcan where he has no contact with Kirk until VʼGer."

Reactions and Reviews

1997

This is a well written story about Spock's decision to leave for Gol. While this is never my favorite scenario this was nicely handled. There was especially effective use of McCoy, first between the doctor and Spock and then McCoy and Kirk. Realistic and fresh dialogue. [1]

I'm sorry, but..."something cold entered him." Frankly, it put me off. [2]

1998

I felt that there was a little too much ground (time) covered a little too skimpily in this story. I would have liked to see more expansion of the initial time Kirk and Spock spent together on Talamon. Is the author British? I wonder because of certain terms used, as well a some sentence structure. [3]

References

  1. ^ from The K/S Press #7
  2. ^ from The K/S Press #7
  3. ^ from The K/S Press #22