Make a Move ('Cause I Ain't Got All Night)
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| Fanfiction | |
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| Title: | Make a Move ('Cause I Ain't Got All Night) |
| Author(s): | stillane |
| Date(s): | 12 November 2010 |
| Length: | 6,006 words |
| Genre(s): | slash fanfiction |
| Fandom(s): | Hawaii Five-0 |
| Relationship(s): | |
| External Links: | Make a Move ('Cause I Ain't Got All Night) (AO3) Make a Move ('Cause I Ain't Got All Night) (LJ) |
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Make a Move ('Cause I Ain't Got All Night) is a Steve/Danny story by stillane.
Summary: Danny is about 80% certain that there are deep waters buried somewhere in there.
Author's notes:
Written for leupagus's Promptfest 2010. Huge thanks to the fantastic lamardeuse, who gets full credit for the fact that this does, in fact, now have the part that was kind of the whole point.
Recs and Reviews
Make a Move (‘Cause I Ain’t Got All Night) by stillane is a slowbuild McDanno story. One of my favourite things about this fic is how incredulous Danny is of Steve the whole story. Alternatively I love how Steve is trying to be what he clearly thinks good dating material but winds up just freaking Danny out. It’s a story is really really in character, both for Steve and Danny and for Chin and Kono where they are featured. I really love the end where Steve meets the parents and the way he reacts to Danny’s mom, because it is an amazingly well done scene, not too heavy on the overt feelings which allows for the subtler side of things to shine. There is a sex scene at the end so some of my followers might want to skip this but for those of you who don’t mind, please enjoy.[1]
This story and my last rec literally were posted within a few days of each other. That was when I really knew H50 was going to be a solid fandom: when within three days I had two entertaining stories from two writers I'd admired and appreciated in other fandoms. The fandom really has a lot of terrific writers.Stillane's story has Danny's parents coming to visit the island, and although Danny knows his parents will get to meet the crazy team he's been hanging out with, he doesn't give it a lot of thought. But Steve does. Steve dresses up. Steve puts on a tie (and to Danny's horror, looks like a junior accountant.) And you know, Danny's a detective ... he gets there eventually, realizing that Steve's pretty invested in having Danny stay in Hawaii and being a part of his life. The thing is ... Danny's pretty invested too - he just doesn't realize it yet.
This story has wonderful characterization, the trademark banter that really makes the show what it is, and a nice view of the team and Danny's family. It's a feel-good story. It's a dopey grin story. It's one that I go back to and reread when I want something fun and a little bit sweet.[2]
Steve/Danny | NC-17. Danny's parents come to Hawaii for Grace's birthday, Steve suddenly owns a tie and Danny calls bullshit. So good, this fic is so good![3]
Steve/Danny, NC-17, ~6000 words === Another one that takes on the family theme and makes something awesome of it.[4]
References
- ^ its-2-am. I wish I had a way of visually representing the H50 theme song here, 26 January 2015. (Accessed 01 June 2016)
- ^ laceymcbain in: crack_van. Make a Move ('Cause I Ain't Got All Night) by stillane (NC-17), 18 February 2012. (Accessed 08 June 2016)
- ^ reeface. Operation: H50 Recs, 2011. (Accessed 10 June 2016)
- ^ topaz119. h5-0 things that made me happy, 30 November 2010. (Accessed 14 June 2016)