Golden People
| Fanfiction | |
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| Title: | Golden People |
| Author(s): | Sharon St. James |
| Date(s): | 1989 |
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| Genre(s): | slash |
| Fandom(s): | Star Trek: TOS |
| Relationship(s): | Kirk/Spock |
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Golden People is a K/S story by Sharon St. James.
It was first published in the print zine Naked Times #22.
Summary
"Kirk is taken over by an entity after touching a golden statue who will free him on the condition that he and Spock make love while on the planet in order for her and her fellow “gods” to feed off of the emotional energy given off."
Reactions and Reviews
1989
This story had some interesting aspects and vivid descriptions of an alien culture. But Spock and Kirk are simply too perfect in this story. I don't really care for stories in which the salvation of either a culture or a whole universe depend on the absolute perfection of the couple. Kirk and Spock are Human and Vulcan; they have their faults and shortcomings as wells as their virtue. They aren't gods, and shouldn't be portrayed as such. [1]
Conceptually speaking, this story is a flawed masterpiece. The central theme, that sex is sacred, is important to me. Ancient Pagan religions considered heterosexual intercourse a rite of fertility, but the golden people made no distinction between reproductive and non-reproductive sex. It was the love and unity of sex that was sacred to them, and I really appreciate that. The one thing that bothered me about the approach of the golden people was their fixation on fucking. They wouldn't let Kirk make Spock come orally because they wanted Spock to fuck Kirk. Why wasn't oral sex as sacred to them as anal intercourse? Isn't there love and unity in that act too? I suspect that this reflects the common prejudice in K/S that fucking is the only real sex and everything else is foreplay. A number of smaller problems in the story are focused around McCoy, who seems to be an incompetent. I don't know why it didn't bother him that a starship captain fainted. It certainly should. He also didn't check Kirk out properly. In addition, he thinks that Kirk and Spock should talk to each other about K/S, but doesn't tell them to do it. This makes him part of their unhealthy conspiracy of avoidance seemingly without realizing it. A qualified psychiatrist like McCoy should know better. Then there is a nit to pick about the golden people. Why couldn't they see Kirk stimulating himself when he turned over if they were in his mind? I also found it difficult to believe that Spock would engage in a series of double entendres without realizing it. One double entendre might easily escape him, but not catching several in a row makes him seem woefully dim. In summary, "Golden People" could have been excellent if only it had been written more carefully. [2]
Kirk and party beam down to a supposedly long dead planet and encounter ancient statues and paintings. It's the statues that cause problems for Kirk as intense sexual dreams plague him. Spock links with Kirk to fight an invasive female alien and they find love with each other.
Nicely written and well developed. This is one of my favorite K/S themes: aliens invading their minds and bodies.
One small complaint is there's an affectation of writing style that increases as the story progressed: no "A's" or "the's" with nouns or subjects with verbs.
Overall, very moving, poignant, and quite sexy. [3]
1990
This is a refreshing new story, beautifully written and moving, as it keeps going to the very end, and I enjoyed it very much. [4]
This story started out all right, but as I read on it got a little strange. I just couldn't really understand why the "Golden People" needed Kirk and Spock to make love. [5]
References
- ^ from The LOC Connection #8
- ^ from The LOC Connection #11
- ^ from The LOC Connection #51
- ^ from The LOC Connection #13
- ^ from The LOC Connection #14