The Omni

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Title: “The Omni”
Author(s): Dana Austin Marsh
Date(s): print zine-11/1989;
KS Archive-09/2010
Length: print zine-33 pg.;
KS Archive-14,139 wds.
Genre: slash
Fandom: Star Trek: The Original Series
External Links: The Kirk/Spock Fanfiction Archive
on AO3

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“The Omni” is a Kirk/Spock story by Dana Austin Marsh.

It was published in the print zine Counterpoint #2 11/1989 and online in K/S Fanfiction Archive in 09/2010.

Summary

From the zine: Counterpoint #2 11/1989: “When the Enterprise responds to a distress call, they discover a colony where everyone has died except for a Human/Vulcan infant who forms a child/parent bond with Kirk, to the chagrin of his bondmate, Spock.”

Reactions and Reviews

1990

Ms. Marsh has once again written a very entertaining story. I wanted to take Kirk and shake him for his insensitivity to his bondmate. I felt sorrow for Spock when he made his painful offer to Kirk. But, at last, our Captain came through and convinced his bondmate of his true intentions and love. The conversation regarding their union not really being sterile was great. I guess I liked this story because it showed that even when two people love each other they can still have problems in their relationship. [1]

1991

I think this story would have been far more interesting if there had been more focus on what is undoubtedly a very extraordinary child. This child was able to reach out telepathically to Kirk while he was still in space to give Kirk the overwhelming urge to beam down to that planet and find her. I don’t think that very many Vulcan adults would be capable of doing that. So it was disappointing to me that the author chose to concentrate on the mundane and predictable conflict between parenting and the spousal relationship instead of on T’Serra herself. This could have been done through the link between Kirk and T’Serra. Such telepathic contact would have made the entire situation more vivid to the reader. Also, I found it puzzling that after an apparently long-time established K/S relationship that Kirk was still “virtually untrained” in the Vulcan mind techniques. Why would Spock allow Kirk to remain in such ignorance? Surely he would give Kirk as much training as he could, as soon as possible. [2]

2021

4.5/5. This was very well written. I don't normally enjoy kidfics, and there were definitely some parts of Kirk and Spock's relationship that I didn't like, but overall this was very good. My main problem is that the title is misspelt. [3][4]

References

  1. ^ The LOC Connection #15 03/1990
  2. ^ The LOC Connection #28 04/1991
  3. ^ Ironically, "misspelt" is not a word.
  4. ^ K/S Fanfiction by uss-genderprise.tumblr.com/