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Poetic Licence
| Fanfiction | |
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| Title: | Poetic Licence |
| Author(s): | Vivien Young |
| Date(s): | 1981 |
| Length: | |
| Genre(s): | slash |
| Fandom(s): | Star Trek: TOS |
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Poetic Licence is an early Star Trek: TOS Kirk/Spock story by Vivien Young.
It was published in Queen Grope.
Summary
Kirk and Spock go to a secluded beach for vacation. He has plans to seduce Spock, and lays on the sand naked in front of him: "Kirk lay back, positioning himself in what he believed to be a flattering pose."
Spock is turned on, and they attempt to have sex. Very clumsy sex. Spock ejaculates prematurely, leaving Kirk unsatsified.
Kirk, crudely and magnanimously, reassures Spock who feels terrible that maybe they can try again another time.
Excerpts
"Yes! Jim, Jim,., could you?" Spock heaved himself up, body trembling with desire, and, just as Kirk was preparing himself at last for the long awaited ecstatic pleasure, the Vulcan shuddered [un]controllably, before subsiding in a crumpled heap next to Kirk, panting harshly. It was over...There was a moment's stunned silence. Then Kirk heaved his bruised and aching body to a sitting position.
"Shit!" he murmured expressively, as he looked down at his own still healthy erection.
He sat, panting with frustration, willing the ache in his groin to go away, regarding the now deflated Vulcan through narrowed eyes.
"This is ridiculous!" he finally complained irritably, when he had got his breath back. "We're never going to manage anything at this rate!"
To cover his embarrassment, Spock began to rise unsteadily to his feet, but almost fell over again, for his legs were still imprisoned by the wet trunks which clung to his thighs. With difficulty he managed to roll them down his legs, and then stepped out of them.
"Forgive me, Jim... maybe I could..."
"No!" Kirk yelled, but then added in a somewhat quieter tone, "Sorry, Spock, but I don't think I can take any more just at the moment."
"I understand, Jim," Spock replied, his face unreadable once more. "Perhaps later... "
Kirk almost visibly flinched at Spock's words. No! It was impossible! There was no way he could go through all that again! Covering his true feelings,however, he grinned and nodded, anxious not to hurt Spock.
"Sure, Spock," he responded enthusiastically, as he rose painfully, rubbing his aching back. "We'll lick this thing yet, you just wait and see."
"Come on... race you to the sea," he added as he set of gamely at a brisk trot, bravely ignoring the pain in his back.
Spock's eyes misted with tears as he watched the stocky figure bounding ahead of him, so gallantly trying to conceal his discomfort. How like Jim to ease his embarrassment by shrugging off the incident in such a manner!
"Perhaps later... " Yes indeed! And this time he would not fail him.
Secure in the knowledge of his love, heart filled with a sudden tenderness, he followed happily in hot pursuit