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It was published in the print zine Scattered Stars #10.
"1st Officer Kirk is raped, but finds the courage to confess his love to Spock, his captain, after awakening from surgery."
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A short AU story in which Spock is Captain and Vulcan Ambassador, Kirk is his First Officer of just three months, and already they share a link. This is a ‘first time’/rape of Kirk for reasons unknown/ type of story, and introduces two other species for little gain that I can see. It would stand well as a chapter in a longer story, with a point to be gained by torturing Kirk, and I spent several seconds trying to understand what was meant by the description of Jim’s poor mangled dick that had been twisted ‘severally’. Sorry I am a literal reader, and that stopped me dead. Try substituting the ‘a’ by an ‘e’ and you get ‘severely’ which makes much more sense. 
- from The K/S Press #103