Foresight (Star Trek: TOS story)

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Title: Foresight
Author(s): Gena Moretti
Date(s): 1997
Length:
Genre: slash
Fandom: Star Trek: The Original Series
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Foresight is a Kirk/Spock story by Gena Moretti.

It was published in the print zine KaleidoScope #6.

Summary

"A/U: Cadet Kirk is thrown through the Guardian and ends up the property of a pre-reform Vulcan, Spock."

Reactions and Reviews

I was very much looking forward to reading this because I love her writing. But this shows that there has to be an exception to every rule. Assuming that it is indeed Gena Moretti who wrote it and that there's only one around with the same name, I could've sworn it was done by someone else. This story feels dead, which is the exact opposite to the feeling that I usually get when reading her stories. Here and there I got a glimpse of what could have been. [1]
Another terrifically imaginative Gena Moretti story richly filled with the sights, sounds and smells of her image of Vulcan's past.

All through, however, are some strange, inconsistent or downright weird things, but no matter-just go with it and enjoy it. There's certainly plenty of K/S and even some good sex scenes, so I ended up not totally paying attention to the flaws. So once you get past the beginning where Starfleet Academy instructors allow a bunch of cadets to "blow off steam" by zooming around the Guardian Of Forever on their air-scooters (no matter that any tampering with the thing could change all of history and time for an eternity), you're home free.

Kirk falls through and ends up with gorgeous, virile warrior Spock. The story proceeds as Kirk adapts quickly and easily to a life as Spock's love slave-my kind of scenario-and proves himself proud and courageous (and real good in bed, of course).

Some language difficulties like "Kirk's male part" (which part is that?), but I loved Spock's calling Kirk's kind: "round ears". And Spock didn't know about kissing so Kirk shows him and Spock calls it: "lips together". Very imaginative stuff. And a fine sex scene complete with descriptions of actions-no cut to the crashing waves here.

Rather jarring to have it be fourteen years later all of a sudden, but it is and now the Spock ancestor, appropriately named Spock, is Kirk's first officer, and, appropriately enough, an exact twin of the past Spock. Also, there's a really good sexy dream sequence of Kirk fucking both Spocks.

So there's a lot to like in this nice long Moretti story. [2]

References

  1. from The K/S Press #18
  2. from The K/S Press #17