Breathe In, Breathe Out
|Title:||Breathe In, Breathe Out|
|Creator:||Karen aka zeta0497 on LiveJournal|
|Music:||"Breathe In, Breathe Out" by Mat Kearney|
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Vidder's summary: "Harry's internal and external struggles."
Overall impression: Good effort but the vid ultimately lacks that extra something to achieve an emotional connection.
Titles: None as far as I could see.
Music choice: The singer has a nice voice and the song is appropriately wistful and melancholy. I couldn't help feeling that it's main line of "Breath in/out" was a bit silly though.
Narration, Tone and Movement: Pretty straightforward vid in movement and tone.
Cuts, Transitions, Effects & Colouring/Coloring: There was no notable effects.
Final notes: The vid needs an emotional punch or a way to connect to the viewer. Maybe the vid was too long or the scenes were trying too hard to connect to the lyrics, often with humorous effect, but I kept waiting to be grabbed by the vid and it didn't come.