The Dark Path

Fanfiction
Title:	The Dark Path
Author(s):	Taleya
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Genre(s):	gen
Fandom(s):	The Sentinel
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The Dark Path is a Sentinel story by Taleya.

Reactions and Reviews

This story follows on from the end of the episode "Dead Drop". Well, it may follow on, but I don't follow it. It didn't make sense to me. It started out promisingly, with the emotional aftermath of the episode, and I thought it would be a nice insightful emotional resolution story. Then it turned into something completely different! I can't see where one follows on from the other, except possibly the implication that Jim threatening to drop Rachins at the end of the episode is explained by the Evil Presence. But as it was, the spirit plane stuff just felt cliched to me, and lacked subtlety. There's more to a choice between good and evil than a fancy setting and rotting corpses. This story really did not work for me. So... what do *you* think?