Good Boy

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Title: Good Boy
Author(s): trueriver
Date(s): 11 August 2006
Length: 668 words
Genre: domestic
Fandom: Mary Renault
External Links: archived on LJ

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"Good Boy" is a ficlet by trueriver based on Mary Renault's 1953 novel The Charioteer. The story is seen from the perspective of Patch, the bull terrier puppy introduced by poicale in her story, "Home". Presumably it is in the same time frame, which would place it a couple of years after the war.

Patch gives his views on his relationship with his two masters, Ralph and Laurie. Ralph is firmer with the dog; Laurie (who "has something wrong with his hind leg") is more inclined to let him on the bed.

Comments on the story included the following:

  • "Clever puppy :) I liked the POV, and this is so sweet and heart-breaking at the same time :)"—comment by queen_ypolita
  • "sweet and sad - I think it must be the innocence of the pov that makes it so touching..."—comment by my_cnnr
  • "Oh! I loved this! Spuddy and his bad hind leg! Meep!"—comment by slipperieslope
  • "So sweet. I love the way you've capitalized certain words to emphasize their importance within Patch's doggy brain. I also love Patch's insights into who is In Charge."—comment by mysid