|Author(s):||Caroline K. Carbis|
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It was first published in Oblaque #4 and has been archived online.
Reactions and Reviews
MUSE OF FIRE RESPONSIBLE: Caroline K. Carbis
HAS POOR VILA BEEN DRAGOONED INTO THIS SHITSHOW? Yep, Vila
WHY ARE BLAKE AND AVON DOOMED THIS WEEK? they can be together I guess but vila will be there too to make sort of comedy cockney oo-er noises
EDITOR’S NOTE: clear
PROSE: gape-jawed barracuda anus, ends with a joke about ‘meat’ and ‘sandwiches’–have we lived and fought in vain?OVERALL: So this needs rewritten, but if one rewrote it, it could be decent. It is essentially just a B/A fic–Vila is around at the beginning so Blake can see Avon kissing someone (any one of 10 other things could have done the job of this) and then at the end… for a threesome he has had 0 part in bringing to fruition? That is not ABOUT him for either of the others? Also idk really what anyone feels in this. Or why anything matters? Eh.